-find the interesting among the normally mundane.
3 specific things that lead to the single effect
-His descriptions of people
-Their misleading disinterest in his greetings
-Their caring message to him at the end
What would you change?
-I would take away the clouds and create a bright sunny day.
-This would negatively effect the Single Effect in the way that his optimism would not seem quite so out of place and the bright clothing worn by him and the girl would not stand out as much.
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